AWESOME!
Animation was great, and so were the graphics. Love the music, too!
AWESOME!
Animation was great, and so were the graphics. Love the music, too!
Very good
I liked what little there is. The animation is good and so is the overall feel.
thanks. I glad you like it.
Hmmm...
This is good for your first submission, but not that good in NEWGROUNDS. You should add sound effects. If you don't have a microphone, try www.a1freesoundeffects.com or other sound libraries.
Thankyou sincerely, I do have a microphone I just got a little lazy on the sound.
Pretty good
I love stop motion animation, so this is really cool to me. I like the drawn smoke and guns firing, and I like the simple fact that it's a paper airplane. (Just one point of because the movement could've been smoother)
It was smoother originally, but it was also going way too fast. Something to improve on though. Thanks for reviewing.
I dunno...
Reminds me a little too much of those old 25 cent sci-fi comics with random good guys and some strangely deformed bad guy that has a german accent and is always trying to destroy the world or something with a gicantic machine that uses "power beyond your control, puny humans". The artwork is good though, I must give you that.
PS: Challenge! Try making an animation with no tweens whatsoever! =D
I think I did at least one episode with ALMOST no tweens, but...I'm such a fan of cheap shortcuts!!!
Wow!
Amazing! Make another! I love how you perfectly mixed the animation with the videos. Awesome!
Oh I will in time...don't think I could handle anymore throwing myself into cupboards and whatnot at the mo...
Thanks for the review :D
Cool
Nice style, although a little more detail on the ninjas would be nice (as Redwing36 said). I like the fight effects, but I wish it were longer :). I'll be waiting for the next one...
Thanks for your advice, and don't worry, the next one will be longer, and better.
Hm.
Not the best, but not bad. The animation is okay, but it's too short. I can tell you worked hard on it, but make your next movie a little longer. :]
thanks ;)
Funny, but could have been better.
Needs sound!!!! Even just a quiet background track of music would have been good. If not that, then it seems like the tree should roar or something when it reveals its sharp teeth. Anyway, with that said, I thought it was pretty good.
I agree entirely with you on the whole music and detail aspect, that said, I think you'll find there is actually roaring and laughing sound effects on it. I am working on an updated more detailed version currently, that goes for a little longer and thanks to your input, i'll definately consider all the lacking factors. Thanks!-Finn
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